Major Project Progress

I'm working on the issues identified in my last meeting with sir but I'm beginning to really worry about the length of my major and how I will cut it down. At the moment it all seems very crucial but I'm hoping that by the time is it polished I will be comfortable enough to cut out a substantial amount. I'm also hoping to enhance the modality of my essay - I need to make an impact on the reader. Okay, back to work!