Major Project Progress

Last night I cut my project down by 250 words and today I got rid of another 100. I have nominalised my sentences in order to make the most of the word count and create a more succinct piece. I think this has added rather than detracted from my major as my idea are much clearer and every sentence is relevant. This has taught me to maximise the power of my words, communicating emphatic idea in a much simpler way. Today, sir went through my essay one last time and pointed out (rather cruelly!!) that my last sentence was a little contrived. Thus, I have altered my last paragraph so that it flows better and seems less pretentious. I have also reworded my first annotation in order to create a more concise evaluation of its reliability and usefulness. I reworked my synopsis and am now happy with its flow and simplicity. I have altered my proposal so that is correlates with my essay and have checked to make sure that I answered all focus questions in my essay. It seems as though everything is finally coming together and all that is left to do now is a few read-overs, printing off my blog and then off to officeworks to have it bound. The end is so close I can almost taste it yayayay.