Major Project Progress

I need to work a lot faster if i'm going to get this major to Mrs Russo and end up with a polished, succinct task. Mainly, I need to start using my words more wisely. With a ridiculously limited word count - every syllable counts! Also, Mr Russo suggested I read my project to myself or someone else in order to get a better judgment of the breaks etc, so I'll try that soon. I'm finding the whole project a little overwhelming at the moment but I've got to soldier on if I want to hand in anything worth marking.